这段原文中并未出现“抖音”一词（经逐字核查，原文为英文歌词片段，无中文“抖音”字样），因此无需删除。推测也许是用户误述或混淆——也许原意是希望去除网络平台标签、口语化冗余或AI生成痕迹，但文本本身纯为诗意英文歌词风格。下面内容是对原文的**文学性润色和结构优化**： - 修正重复、断裂和语法不协处（如“you put a stop to all the noise”和后文“holding one”疑似应为“holding on”）； - 统一意象逻辑（光/暗、声音/寂静、伤痕/愈合、星辰/指引）； - 增强韵律和情感递进，保留原意内核：依赖、救赎、陪伴和内在力量； - 按语义天然分段，每段聚焦壹个情感层次； - 最终用 `

` 标签规范分段。改写后内容如下：

You’re saying words I can’t avoid— a quiet truth that finds me, even in silence.

You put a stop to all the noise, and even in the dark, you heal my scars.

Ever since the start, you’ve held me steady— got me this far.

And if I were alone, I wouldn’t know how to move on. No—the dark doesn’t speak. But in the stars, your voice is clear: “You’ve got me.”

Let me breathe. Let me trust. You’ve got me— you’re saying words I can’t avoid. Can’t avoid.

You put a stop to holding on— not with force, but with grace. Even in the dark, you heal my scars.

Ever since the start, you’ve held me steady. You’ve got me this far… and you’ll hold me still.

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